
Okay so I know this is gonna be a little off from what I normal post, I've started a Star Wars fan fiction(I NEED A LIFE! rofl, but what else am I supposed to do without power in a mucky rain storm), I'm not sure if any of you are familiar with Star Wars but for those who are(if any) this takes place during the third and last prequal: Revenge of the Sith just before and after Obi-wan goes to Utapau to keep an eye on things. As you will see I altered the plot line-as I always do*smirks* it's also a bit romanic(like 1 or 2 kisses) yes I'm a sucker for lovey dovy stuff....*hides* I have like the whole story written out on book but I have to get it online and desphire chapters because I never did so this is slightly choppy(sorry)
Disclaimer: I do not own the original Cannon, nor do I wish to publish this work, it is just for meer fun-George Lucas and his partners in "crime" deserve all the credit.
Revenge of the Sith Fan fic. Prologue:
'It seems like many years have come to pass and all should be calm within this galaxy but within these past 10 or so years nothing but terror and greed for power have wrecked at the galaxy which I love with all my heart. Senate meetings are becoming less and less barable, headaches come everytime I'm within them and some are worrying for my health, and with good reason. I do not take to evil well, and evil is brewing-I will not put my finger on it, I will not say names but I have an idea on who I believe is behind this, the "Sith" they call him-the killer of men is more sufficant. No more blood shed and distruction have I seen in all my 24 years than I have in these past 10 or so. I have taken to joining Senator Organa's secret meetings, I agree with him-we all do-the galactic senate is no longer safe. My fear is for the Jedi, for my beloved and his friends-for Anakin and Padme. Anakin has not been acting the same these past years-since the babe's were born things have been odd about him, I worry for him often. My nerves are on edge the Jedi council is now ruled by the senate and my beloved Obi-wan was called down to a meeting today, who knows what that could mean, for one only at the young age of 30 he's had far too much weight upon his strong shoulders and I fear it is breaking him down, physically and mentally, my hope is his spirits survive this war...'
The door shut quickly and Anttolia looked up from her writing in her journel on her bed, "Ben" she murmured and quickly got up.
Obi-wan hurriddly walked into Anttolia's appartment and started packing his things he had there that he knew he'd need. Anttolia walked from her bedroom into the entry way of the living room and leaned on the doorframe, "Ben?"
Obi-wan glanced over his shoulder, "Yes, Ann?"
She looked at him her eyes piercing through the back of his head like knives, "Where are you going?"
"Something's come up." Was his only response.
"Ben, what's wrong?" Concern suddenly swept over Anttolia.
Obi-wan turned around, "Something's come up and the Jedi Order needs me more than they thought." he turned back to what he had been doing.
"Obi-wan Kenobi you aren't going anywere till I have an answer." Anttolia said stubbornly while crossing her arms under her chest.
"Anttolia," he sighed, "I can't tell you, I'm sorry, I wish I could."
Anttolia walked foreward, "Why can't you, Ben? If you wish so why can't you?"
Obi-wan sighed more frustrated why must she ask him these questions "It doesn't envolve the senate, Ann."
Anttolia looked at him, a crossed expression upon her face how dare he keep something of importance from me. "I'm not the senate, Ben, I'm Anttolia, your friend, your bestfriend, your girlfriend."
"I know, Ann, I know, it's just-it's very...complicated...." Obi-wan said, he was not in the mood for fighting with Anttolia.
"Ben." She said firmly forcing him to look at her and then looked him in the eye. "Tell me."
Obi-wan took one look at those green eyes and they captured him like they had 10 years ago, he couldn't lie to her better yet leave her in the dark. He turned around and started packing things before sighing and turning around, "A has begun, Ann, I know you know that, but well... the masters have given me orders to go to Utapau and keep an eye on things..."
Chapter 1
"Ben..." Anttolia started.
"Things are happening that even the Jedi's can't explain....I'm sorry Ann, you can't come."
"Ben, but what if..." She started hiding a quiver from her voice.
Obi-wan looked at her caringly, "Pet, baby...come one, don't do this."
"Ben, I don't like the feeling I'm getting. Ben, if the other masters don't know what's going on or can't explain it maybe that means something-Ben, i'm afraid." Her eyes welled up with tears, "I'm afraid i'm going to loose you. I'm not a jedi, Ben, I'm not perfect and I know no matter what you say I could wake up tomorrow and you not walk through that door and I never see you tomorrow or ever again-Ben..." A couple tears started to role down her cheek. "I can't live without you..."
Obi-wan feeling her hurt, her pain, her worry without even trying, looked at her with his caring tentative blue eyes, "Oh, Ann..." He cupped her soft, warm, tear stained cheek in his big, rough, hand but not even his touch stopped the tears. He looked up at the cieling lightly and then gently wrapped his arms around her pulling her close to him and holding her tightly and protectively. He rested his beard covered chin on her head some how even though she was significantly smalled than he was. He lightly rubbed his chin on her head then kissed her head as he started running his hand through her silky, wavey, brown hair, "Ann, Ann, listen to me, I'm going to be right at that doorway tomorrow," Anttolia's sobbed harder and lightly lifted her head enough to let the word, 'you can't promise that or make those kind of promises.'
"Hey-hey, Ann." He lifted her chin with his pointer finger, "Listen to me."
"Ben, I..."
"I know you're scared," he sighed, "To be truthful, I am too."
Anttolia opened her eyes to blink lightly, "You are?"
Obi-wan nodded, "Ann, do you trust me?"
"With all my heart, Ben, I trust you with my life."
"Then trust me when I say everything will be alright-and when I get back we'll settle down-as much as possible....away from fighting." A smile spread a cross Anttolia's face at those words and Obi-wan smiled back wiping her eyes, "There, there's that picture perfect smile." he said causing a wetted laugh to escape Anttolia.
Obi-wan transmitter went off and he looked at Anttolia, "That's my cue....I'll see you soon." He said looking in her green eyes still clouded by welling tears which he knew he could not stop.
"Be careful, Ben." She murmured to him.
"I will, you be careful yourself." Obi-wan bent down and kissed her neck lightly then her cheek then looked in those beautiful green eyes of hers and put his hand lightly on her cheek and kissed her both of them closing their eyes for once everything seemed just-perfect.
Obi-wan lightly pulled away gently then in one movement at the same time walks off and out the door. Anttolia touched her lip where Obi-wan had just kissed her, then put her hand on her chin worriedly, her other arm rested around her waist. She watched the door where Obi-wan just walked out and then turned and walked to one of the many huge windows that surrrounded her appartment and lets her hands drop to the windowsil and looks out watching Obi-wan's ship fly out, she'd wait here but if things got serious she was helping and not even the Galactic Senate or the Masters were going to stop her. She wiped the tears from her eyes staring at the setting sun and the colors it's reflecting on the sky and the business of the city. May the force be with you and protect you in this your dire our of needed protection-this war is far from over we have not yet seen the worst to come. Anttolia sighed at that thought before continuing to watch the setting sun.
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Anttolia had been pacing for hours by the open windows that now over looked a pitch dark city before she decided to sit down. She sat down and turned on the tv, the news was on-she immediatly turned it off-that was the last thing she wanted to watched. Anttolia raked a hand through her hair while letting out a deep worried breath. Her transmitter went off and she picked it up look at the message on it, it was odd. She was needed at the Senate at this hour? Well Obi-wan wouldn't freak at this-this was her job and she wouldn't be alone she would be in the Senate with thousands upon millions of others around. She would be safe no one would think to take or hurt her there-it couldn't hurt to go. She got up and changed before leaving she looked at her weapon belt and decided she didn't need it and yet again started to walk off then a nagging voice-quite like Obi-wan's- came into her head telling her to take it. She sighed and grabbed her silver belt and clasped it on and walked out shutting all lights off mentally changing her away message on her transmitter and went to her speeder. Soon after Anttolia pulled up to the Galactic Senate and turned down her motor. She looked up at the building to see a light turn on in the building then she noticed more on and fighting noticable. She looked around worried then sees the temple and turned her motor up and drove over-something was terribly wrong.
Meanwhile.....
'Hi you've reached Anttolia, I'm at the Galactic Senate and I'm either busy or can't anwser my transmitter right now so either leave a message or try later.'
Bail patiently waited for Anttolia's beep before leaving his message, "Anttolia, I pray you are not at the Senate....we've gotten mention they are under attack....be careful Senator Pardonia." He hung up and sighed-what had she gotten herself into now....




14 comments:
odd usually spacing isn't like that...
Jeez Katie, I'm running out of ways to express the magnitude of your awesomeness... LOL! ;) But OF COURSE it's great. Starwars is awesome...Duh... And you don't really need a life. Like, if I wrote as much as you do, I would be sooooo happy.:P
I know what you mean about the yucky rainstorm! We didn't lose power, but my bedroom is flooded. :( Which means I'm sort of kicked our of it for like, two weeks, which is like WHAAAAAAAAAAAA!
Anyways, awesome story...:D
Anna
Aw shucks thanks!!!
I wasn't sure about posting it A. I didn't know if anyone had a clue what star wars is(i had to introduce a few friends into it once and now they're hooked*evil laugh) and B. it's a little lovy dovy*sighs* which I am a sucker for....I think romantic stuff is cute-gosh my guys friends ever hear that rofl! I personally think Star wars rocks*dances happy dance* I was very happy when my grandparents bought my the series of movies(birthday/christmas) I was on a happy high for like 5 days and I watched them immediately rofl.
Yeah this isn't my favorite Fan Fiction even though I love it I much perfer the condition of my LOTR one and the Harry potter on I have started with Tonks and Remus-but this is not my worst writing rofl-trust my I can have BAD writing.
AW! that's too bad about your room-hope it cleans up! roads around us our pretty drenched-Goodwin Mills Road(my road) in two places heading towards Jackson's corner are completely flooded pretty much(one is the Huff road the other is someone's yard spilling over the road)
Back on to good news, I'm almost on another chapter of my LOTR Fan fic*evil laugh* I'll be posting that in the next 2 weeks. What have you done to me Anna you've created a writing machine! *hugs you* and I love you for it!
Whoa talk about long winded! :)
Stay Dry!
Katie
Thats good!!!! I really like it. Keep on writing! I wish I could.
This stupid computer wont let me comment using my regular username. Great story ideas Lauren.
Kelia
Lol. Thanks, Kelia. :P
OHMY, Katie! You're absolutely amazing!!! Anyways, if you need a life, we could trade - I'd LOVE to be able to just go "hmm... what if..." and out pours a story.
:D
Oh, Anna! Not again! I'm so glad we don't get THAT much rain here - though while I'm writing, it's raining - and that my room doesn't flood. Whew.
I hope you stay all nice and cozy (and dry, lol).
YOU WILL BE GETTING AN EMAIL SOON, I SWEAR.
This time, I'm making it extra special. [as in, something we've never tried before].
...That was kind of long. Haha.
Loveyoualllll!
Laur-rawr.
Oh Katie, I think we're all suckers for lovy-dovy stuff! You know, there's just something about all that smooching... LOL!
Yes Lauren, AGAIN. :( Since this is the second time in one year, we're taking out the carpet and putting in indoor/outdoor ones, so when it happens again it will dry faster. *sigh*
Ooooh, something we've never tried before? :O Now I'm excited! And really, really REALLY curious. Eeek! Rofl!
You stay nice and cozy (and dry, *glares*) too. :D
LOVE,
Annnnnnnnnnnnnna
Rofl.
Mmm... It's all nice and dry-ful.
OH, you can come live with me until your room's done! :D
Haha, I wish.
Oh, Katie! I can't write anything without lovey-dovey smooshy-gooshey stuff. I've tried, and they were all hateful and evil.
Sigh.
Oh, well. :D
Hehe! I just have to wait to send Ms. Annabanana an email until afte rmy machine thing gets fixed. Grumblegrumble.
:D
L
Lol, Anna!
THANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOUTHANKYOU!
You're seriously one of the best friends. Ever.
:D
Thanks [times a million]!
L.
YOU'RE WELCOME!!! :D
And thanks also.You're definately one of the best friends. Ever. ;)
Lol.
Also, Katie please tell me your going to be doing the next session of Book Covers! Leila told me you hadn't signed up... and it just wouldn't be the same without you!!!! :O So please tell me you're doing it! Please? Pleaaaseeeas?
I hadn't gotten notifaction about it. COURSE I WANT TO SIGN UP! It killed me not to be at the mini session! I'll have to call Leila-do you know when it starts.
Yeah....I'm a sap.... :-/ lol
Book Covers?
I WANT TO SIGN UP! :D
Lol, I wish. What is it?
:P
♥
It's a teens book group at the library.It's very awesome, but it's kind of annoying, because this session I've read all of the books already! :O Oh well... Lol.
And Katie, it starts Monday. We're reading Sabriel, by Garth Nix, and there's extra books, so you can probably pick one up. PLEASE COME!!!!
Miss Annapants :)
Ahhhh...
I love Sabriel. :)
I love Grath Nix. :)
I love you guys. :)
♥ L.
Uh, Garth. xP
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