Wednesday, June 13, 2007

Random Free Writings!


'Ello people! LOL! So as I have stated in comments I am taking a writing course(which so far is awesome!) Well in it we have to Free Write(for all of you who know what that is) and the ones I have done truly fit my book charactors and I may possibly be shifting the point of view and such and slipping them into my book, or some would be journal entries(the last one is especiall a journal entry lol) They are completely unedited and I can already pick up on some mistakes but at this point I'm over riding it....so yeah, unedited, all go with my story.....might be a bit confusing....but here it goes! :)

Here they are:



His face was stern, his eyes hard, he looked like a block of ice frozen in time to preserve it's denseness. The presence around him was hard and extremely powerful-so powerful it almost knocked you off your feet.

He walked toward me but I did not quiver, I stood tall and strong as he glared at me with all intensity of hatrid. I narrowed my gazr as well though I was not full of hate even though I had full right to be. He had taken so much from me and everyone else, he deserced any punishment he'd ever get. Even though he would deserve punishment-if he ever got it-I could not help but feel slightly sorry for him and his younger brother-not to mention the planet they rule-anyone who could kill innocent lives and not regret it must be sick beyond doctor's care.

The scar over his left eye and cheek blazed as his glare intesified. I knew he hated me and I knew how much he wished to kill me; let him try I wouldn't be afraid to fight back. I had learned not to fear him or anyone one else from living on this planet. All around this planet there was hate, even the creatures show hate,most of them anyway-my dragon Emerald in an exception as to my fiance's dogs.

The man got into my face trying hard to intimidate me, if I had the chance and I knew there were no consiquences for neither me or my family I'd have laughed.

"You scared?" His voice snarled close to my face and this time I almost couldn't help it. The corner of my lips twitched with the want to laugh or smile but somehow, with some control I with held. I didn't fear him, I could be as strong as he if I desired and I could make him fear me but I've never tried because I knew what that would do to my fiance and child. They would be hunted down like animals and slautered without another thought by my uncle and I could no bare the thought of that ever happening. "I said are you scared?!" He demanded again in a snarling voice while raising his voice. I remained silent, I was walking the edge of life and death and i knew it and I knew I should answer him but I suppose something within the genes in my blood running through my vaines had other ideas. "Do you know the trouble you're in my boy!" He spat. Yes, yes I did, more than ever and I knew the consequences of my actions more than ever too. "How Dare you try and stop us from doing a course of action, from doing our job." Somehow killing people didn't seem like much of a job to me, "I'd have your head for such treachory boy." I knew how true it was but all I did was smirk, it looked as mischevious and evil as he was.

I could see the fire burning within him as I did so and some part of my liked seeing that fire-liked that danger. "But you can't-not now." I paused slyly, watching that fire blaze, "Seidon refused the crown to continue working in the army and with uncle," I paused once more while watching his face as I spoke my brothers name. My brother who was just as evil as he, "The means," I continued, "I'm the only one who can take it when you die," I paused one last time smirking even more mischeviously as I watched the horror rised within my fathers face at that thought, "Father." I spat out keeping all tone of happiness from my voice. I was not happy he was my father but I was happy I had annoyed him, I had bothered him just like usual but yet I was almost past the line of no return-any other remarks and I would not have my head by morning. My father hated that I was his blood and he liked to think I wasn't his son but there was no denying it anymore, now that I was the one and only sole heir to the crown.


'When I look up at the sky watching the stars quessing what's in what constalation I look back on when everything was so simple and I was so curious. How much have I changed? How much have I grown from that girl I used to be? I'm still the same girl just with more things around me I love and love me back.

As I lay here looking up at the constilations I think of how calming it is to know that my friends and family are always there for me no matter what.

As I lay here under the stars gazing up at their beauty, a shooting star whizzes past and I give a silent prayer and wish, one for my family, friends, and thoughs in need of safety. For the galliant warriors fighting on any planet or galaxy to return to their homes safe and sound.

My wish is one I know won't happen now at least not for a few years, but my wish is for intergalactical peace and love. Peace and love everywhere, everyone getting a long, no violance. Nothing but peace and surenity. Some day, some where, some how, by the will of the gods perhaps, you will see it, it will happen. Even if it starts when you're laying under the stars gazing upward in awe at their beauty'


'I've realized I have an extremely strong voice in the Senate which is kind of odd because I'm what....15? Anywho, it's still really odd because they all listen to me unlick in the Army school where half the time I'm ignored by these jerks or shoved down the hall by impatiant or tall people. Kinda odd how sometimes you can be so invisible but yet so there and noticed at the same time. It's also really annoying too. I'm also a tad clumsy so that doesn't help me at all. I seem to have picked up a trait of being the last out of class but yet still ending up in a mob of impatiant people trying not to be late for class. Anyone ever notice that around here monday seems to be the more crowded of the days like more people seem to be in the halls or something? It's so darn congested. Garretts being a jerk again-not that that's a surprise or anything-it's just in his nature. Perhaps it comes from his father-he's pretty jerkish himself-my luck he's my Lord.....Oh well, the upside is I have all my friends here and not everyone here hates me-I'm sure more upsides will come. Well bell rang which means lights out "or else" though I've never heard of anyone ever getting the "or else" probably just a way for the Lords to get the kids and teens to go to sleep quicker. Another fun filled day tomorrow.....hopefully :)

L.K.

(Lady Knight-yeah dorkish I know-I'm just a squire....blame it on my friends (: )

Alana

4 comments:

Miss Katie said...

See told ya, I'd post sooner or later! :)

Katie-Baity

AnnaRose said...

I'm so glad you posted!!!!! And as always, the writings are awesome. :D Now, in the first one, the guys fiance is Alana right? I liked seeing things from his perspective! And the last one, from Alana's perspective, was kind of a surprise, since her voice was totally differant then I was expecting, but I liked it!!
Write on, dude. Lol! :P
Annapants

LiterallyLauren said...

LOVE IT!!!
:D
I'm in Ireland, guys! I get back in three days, and I can't wait until I finally don't have to PAY for time to sit down and talk to you guys! Sheesh!
jhadksjhasldjs. I'm totally in love with it. KEEP UP THE AWESOMENESS.
And PLEASE keep posting without me!!! I WANT you to!!!
♥ from the Irish. :D
(I have some VERY funny stories to tell when I get back!)

♥TIMESAMILLION! I MISS YOU GUYS!
Lauren

LiterallyLauren said...

PS - Just read it again, and I still love it.
Still.
Oh, and still.
...Uh-huh. Still.