My Poem

Okay, I know this is totally random, but this afternoon I wrote this poem. I initially wanted to post it because there was a part I didnt like, but while I was typing it up I just fixed it!!! Thats so cool. So here it is.

The heat makes me restless,
My pounding head only eased
By little gusts of wind.

The sky's a blinding gray,
Glaring like a washed out sun,
Some rain would give us hope.

Night reveals no coolness,
Black makes shadows of all things,
Stars smother under clouds.

Its a night for reading,
Dont notice when it changes,
A cool breeze is coming.

I lift my head and see,
The yard is full of moonlight,
Dancing among the trees.

The wind wraps around me,
Pushing away my worries,
I join the moon and dance.

The only thing is, are stars really under clouds? Their technically above it, so should I change it? :D But that doesnt really matter. This is like the first poem I've actually revised. And its alot better revised then it was when I first wrote it!
KrazyK