So i've never attempted to write a horror story (let alone short horror story) and i must say i think i failed misreably LOL but at least i finished a challenge! Wooo for acomplishments!
i'm SURE its not over 2,000 words but i didnt attempt to count them (it made my brain hurt) and the spell check isnt working right now haha so read at your own risk.
I woke up frantically, palms sweating, heart beating at a pace i had never felt before. Where was i? What was going on?
I stayed laying down collecting my thoughts, my heart slowly decreased and i looked around. I was in my living room on my nice little ugly floral couch. Why was i so scared then? I had fallen asleep on the couch while watching animal planet again, this must have been the hundreth time in the past two months, yet i could not shake the feeling.
"Kura, darling, could you vacuum for mummy?" I hear my mothers voice drift over to me.
But..it couldn't have been her..my mother never asked me to do anything in my life she always just demanded it and she never called me 'darling', that name was titled to my sister, i was always 'peanut' and thats the way it had always been.
I shook off the feeling of uneasyness as the room began to spin, i felt like i was trapped in a fun house in one of those giant hamster wheel type things.
"I-i cant find it." I said sitting down, my head throbbing. "Oh thats ok darling." My mothers voice, strangly close to me said. I jumped, where was she? I hadn't seen her. The lights started dimming, my heart went back to pounding so hard i could hear it. "its quite all right.."Another voice said, this time it was the voice of my sister. "Elisa?" I said turning in circles, trying to find something to grab with my hands but there was nothing, i felt as if i was falling into a deep hole just falling knowing that i'll never stop again.
The lights flashed on for a moment and i stared into the faces of my mother and sister, their faces were horribly disfigured, the lights turned off again, it was then that that my memory flooded back. My family was dead, they had been for about a month now. The last words my ears would ever hear was "Your next darling."
Yeah i know, its HORRIBLE and took me about 5 minutes to write haha sooo feel free to lie and say its good or feel free to not comment :)
The ever awesome-o
Jessie
Monday, February 11, 2008
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6 comments:
FREAKY!!!!
D:
I just get this picture of, like, all these dead people on the floor, looking up at her.
*shiver*
If I get nightmares, I swear...
<3L.
If you had nightmares i'd feel like my life accomplished something :D
Lovvve youuuuu
-J-izzle
Rofl.
I love the fact that you're REVELING IN MY FEAR.
GET OUT.
MY FEAR DOES NOT LIKE TO BE REVELED IN.
LMAO guys.
I can't believe you both got your butts to posting WHILE I WAS GONE. Maybe I should go away more often...? :P
But L. is totally right. CREEPY JESSIE, CREEPY. O_O It is totally nightmarish worthy stuff, and the fact that it took you five minutes to write says something possibly frightening about your brain.
Haha. Jk. ;)
I love this challenge. *happy sigh.*
Whoa. Dude. FREAKY!...I guess all those nightmare-worthy-horror-movies you watch came in handy :)
I'm so proud of the you all for getting your challenges done and posted!!! Woo!
And Jess, come on--sometimes the best ideas come up in 5 minutes....and obviously, this is one of them. Kootos....eh spelled something like that...
That was totally awesome! REALLY creepy, and definitely nightmare worthy. Yay you did the challenge! Good for you. Wow, we all did that one and it was the hardest. But considering everyone wrote THEIRS in five minutes maybe it wasnt that hard. For you. LOL
Kelia
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