So, since I'm doing Script frenzy too, I decided to post my play plot. Dont ask me why. But anyways, its based on like ALL the fairytales, and I have no idea how any one would do it on the stage.
READ SLOWLY AND CAREFULLY.
A girl is a slave to her step mother because her father had died. She decides to run away. She gets lost in the enchanted wood, and meets a nice old lady who invites her to her house. The girl decides to pick berries first. While she is picking them a wolf shows up and finds out where she is going. He decides to eat the grandmother and then eat the girl. Upon arriving at the old ladies house, he is turned into a bony old lady by the grandmother who actually is a witch. The witch lets the wolf pose as her, and hides. The girl enters the house, and at once recognizes the wolf as not being the grandmother. She wanted to know why he had wanted to eat the witch, he said he was really an enchanted prince and had been turned into a wolf by the witch. He had quite enjoyed being a wolf, until the other wolfs told him he was not being evil enough. So he decided he had to eat an old lady and beautiful girl. The girl feels sorry for him and wants to help him, but the witch bursts in and locks her up in a high tower. She says to the wolf, “As you
wanted to eat me, I will return the favor and eat you!” She turns him into a very plump little boy and locks him up with the girl. The girl finds an old dusty potion in the corner of the tower, and being very silly, tastes it. It makes her hair grow and grow and grow and grow. She braids it and the enchanted prince climbs out the window. The witch discovers that the girl is trying to escape, but the enchanted prince has fallen desperately in love with the girl and wants to save her. So he concocts a potion to make the witch go to sleep forever. He threw it while the witch was in the room, but unfortunately he had bad aim and it hit the girl. She falls asleep, and the witch cuts off all her hair. She braids it and pretends she is the girl, calling for the enchanted prince. The prince comes and starts up her hair to save her, but the witch drops the hair. Miraculously, the prince does not fall to his death but is carried away on the wings of a giant white bird. The prince finds himself in a cottage with seven short dwarves, who are all very mad at the bird. He learns that they are slaves of an evil queen, who wants a beautiful girl to strengthen her beauty spell. The bird was supposed to have gotten a girl, but he got the prince instead. The prince says he can helps, and so dresses up as the evil queen. He tells the witch that she has a beautiful girl, and so the evil queen demands it. The girl is not very pretty, and the witch thinks she is being very clever by giving the queen her. The prince wakes the girl up, and plans to escape for the forest once and for all, but the dwarves insist that the girl had to go to the queen pretty or not. And so the prince is still trying to rescue the girl. He storms the castle and roars at the evil queen. The evil queen, only hearing the roar, thinks it is her long lost love who was turned into a beast by the witch, who only needs a beautiful girl to fall in love with him to turn him back. She was doing the beauty spell so she would be more beautiful. She says a spell which is supposed to reveal true form, and at the same time the witch finds out her deceit and turns the prince back into a wolf. The queen is heartbroken and cries and cries and forgets all about the girl. Mean while the prince rescues the girl, but the girl does not recognize him and runs away in fright. The prince is very sad, but offers to help the queen. He tells her she is beautiful already, so they go out to find the beasts castle. They find it, but as the queen was already in love with the beast, the breaking of the spell does not work. The witch, to get back at the prince, gives the girl a love potion and makes sure the first person she sets eyes on is the beast. And so the beasts spell is broken, but the wolf is sad because he is sure the girl is naturally in love with the beast. But the queen really is clever and senses treachery, and so turns him into a frog and instructs him on what to do.So while the girl is wandering around the forest moping because the spell is still on her, the prince shows up as a frog and wins her heart. Something that will be said somewhere is “The only thing that can break the strongest of spells is pure love.” So they go happy to the queen,and he gets turned back into a prince. But his parents will not allow him to marry the girl, so they get the queen to make a pair of glass slippers that will hypnotize anyone that sees them. So they get permission. And it is revealed that the witch is actually the girls stepsister, and so the prince banishes the witch and her mother to aforeign land. They all live happily ever after.
The main girls name is Lucy, because her stepsister will call her Lucinder instead of Lucinda. The prince's name is----Corin! I love that name. The stepsisters name might be Miranda, but might not. And the evil-not-really queens name will be Vivian.
It's going to be a musical, since I write songs too. And I wrote a song during nano for my novel, but I'm going to use it for the beginning right before Lucy decides to run away.
What is the place that you call home?
What is the place that holds your heart?
How can it be that they are two different places?
Do you like to stay or roam?
Do you like your place called home?
Do you want a place to start?
Do you want a different heart?
What is the place that you call home?
What is the place that holds your heart?
How can it be that they are two different places?
Usually I dont have tunes for my songs but I wrote one for this one. I dont know what my other songs are going to be like, but I'm glad I have a beginning. :D :D :D I cant wait to start!!!!
KrazyK
Tuesday, May 22, 2007
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WHOA! :O
I mean, I know you'd told me all that before, but still, WHOA!
It's going to be awesome, if you can do it. Good luck! :D
Yes, I know its a crazy plot. And I hope I can do it right, I dont have very much experience in writing plays. :D
KrazyK
Kelia that is awesome! It sounds like a really awesome Idea :) !
I wish you the MOST of Luck with it!
Kaite :)
I'd heard you were doing something with fairytails, but WOW! This was not ANYTHING I could've expected!!!
I can't WAIT to hear about it!
I've told Anna, but I don' think I told the rest of you, that my plot is the Talon story --- I'm turning it into a novel AND a script. Hopefully.
:D
OMYGOODNESS! SIX DAYS UNTIL EUROPENESS!
♥
OH MY GOODNESS! SIX DAYS UNTIL EUROPENESS??!!!! :O
Okaay we better get this party rolling! Does the 28th work for you guys? I thought it might be a good day because it's a holiday, (here, at least, I don't know about OK) and we don't have book group, etc. What time? I think afternoon/evening works for us. Watcha think? :D
L,
Annapants
I'm free anytime on that day so you guys figure it out and I'll be there!(as long as I'm told when it is rofl!) Well accept for like 6 a.m. but that would be pretty early where Lauren is anyway so that works! rofl
I truly do hope you have fun in Europe, Lauren! I think that's awesome about putting the Talon story(interesting name it's taken on(: ) into a novel and script!
I've tried a script once...It wasn't too....erm....well...good..lol I stuck to book writing :)
Katie-baity
Thanks guys! Hopefully the 28th will work. As I said before, three weeks is a long time! How are you going to do ScriptFrenzy in Europe, Lauren? That would be kind of crazy. Hope you can do it though!
KrazyK
Haha, yep! I should be here on the 28th, but I have to warn you that my grandparents are in town, which could really affect things if I'm over at my aunts house whenever we're supposed to meet up. :x
Anyways, I'll REALLY try to be here. REALLY. :D Just give me a time!
[[I bet Mom will let me bring the laptop over to my aunts house --- All is not lost. ;)]]
Haha, I know. The "Talon Story" doesn't yet have a real title, obviously, but I think you guys know what I mean. :D After all, he's the only character that really has a sticky-name except for Vitali, so it doesn't leave me with much choice, hehe.
Yeah, I've never even TOUCHED on Scripting, so this is going to be completely new for me. If I end up not liking it, I'll have to change it to NaNoWriMo2. :P
Yeah, there was slightly a dilema in how to write my script all up, if it really does end up working and I find some spare moment to write in Europe, it will be on regular paper, not a computer, which sucks mightily.
Either way, I'll be happy if I make it to 10k words by the end of the month!
GEEZ, you guys are amazing!
♥
Ps - I lied. I was going by the days of school left, which is totally wrong. SO...
The REAL Countdown to Europe: 8 Days!
LOL Jeesh Lauren get it right! rofl j/k (just kidding) I just popped on to say hi-my math was so complicated tonight(I HATE word problems) and dad just got home so I have to go over it with him
Kaite-bo-baity
By the way Kelia that was a wonderful song on there. I used to write songs when I was younger but it never really you know-stuck. :)
I really liked it. :-D
I hope you can do it-it'll be awesome is so! Keep it up!
Katie-Baity :)
Lol, I never did tell you how awesome that song was!!!
I can't write songs without them sounding like (as Oliver James has said) "cheesy morning cartoon" theme songs.
:D
I love it!!
Ooh, guess what? Tomorrow, I get to have an operation on my toe - nothing bug, but owoow. Pary for me! :O
ANDDDD....
YES! I can do it anytime in the afternoon on the 28th! :D Are we just going to be posting on here?
♥
Whoa, an operation on your toe Lauren??! WHY????! :O
Okay, the 28th it is... So you don't have school then L? If you don't then we can just do it from like 2 our time (so 1 your time) to whenever... probably 4... or later. And yes, we can just do what we did with our other party. Unless you can think of something more interesting... lol.
KATIE, YOU'D BETTER BE THERE!
:P
I'm totally jealous of you kk, because you've got the song writing thing down already. That's the scariest part for me! Eeek!
Annapants
Thanks again, guys. I like song writing, but I almost think this would be better as a play. Its such a fast, on the move plot, I dont know if it would be weird to stop and sing every once and a while. What do you think?
I cant wait for the 28th! The last party was so much fun.
Toe operation! Hope it isnt too painful, Lauren.
KrazyK
Yesssh. My big toe. The toenail is weird, and it's growing into my skin. The operation's no big, though. Haha.
You guys pick the time, and I'll totally be there!
Lol, yeah, I think I'm doing a screenplay instead of an actual stage-play, since I don't really plan on using a whole bunch of music except for backgrounish-stuff. I love picking music ot go with scenes. ♥
ANYWHO, love you guys. I'm getting ready for the big Freshman party tomorrow (not to mention the toe thing... Ew)
♥allover.
LAUREN.
I will totally be there, just tell me the time :)
Ouch-anytype of surgery to me is painful rofl. We both seem to be having medical problems rofl! I have for awhile but I just had an MRI today for my brain for one of the problems.
I love picking music to go with scenes or chapters or characters for books. It's oddly but amussingly entertaining :)
I'll write more tomorrow-
Katie-Baity
An MRI? That's a whole lot more scary than my toe thing! Lol! Good grief!
My toe is okay now. It's all wrapped up in bandaids and tape, so I'll be safe with it. SIX DAYS.
[Haha... This time, it really is six days.]
♥
OH, and I'm working on a future post before I leave. It's slightly in the works right now. :P
I don't know what we'll do with you gone if we can't'ooo' and 'awe' over your work Lauren! :), You should post something(if you have anything) so we can 'oo' and 'awe' over your work :)
I'm glad your toe is doing good. I've had a friend who had to have those surgeries(that spelling doesn't look right) all the time.
Yeah the MRI was kind of freaky-luckily they let my play music so I could listen to that instead of being in silence for a LONG time.
Wow, you're trip is coming up REAL soon. I told my parents that there are several places I want to travel and they said "You have to get on a plane first." lol I've never been on one, I'm not afraid of them just sort of afraid of the landing and the taking off and possibly me being closterphobic(don't know if I would be or not). I'd love to travel to Colorado, Alaska, Italy, Hawaii, Australia, Ne Zealand and several other places-yeah I know nothing quite spectaculat but I'd still LOVE to see them! :)
I'll post the beganing of the Fan Fiction I told you about, Lauren, when you get back-that will give me the chance to finnish the 2nd chapter and to make a summary so you all aren't confused.
Isn't it BEAUTIFUL out Anna? The whole weekend except for Sunday night is supposed to be like this-I love the sun and all-I just wish out pool was out! It's just a tad too humid for me without some way to cool off. Tomorrow we're gonna go yard saling and do some cleaning and wash the cars-possibly also go see the next Pirates of the Carribean movie*crosses fingers*
Well all of to do my Math Homework, I'll post again later,
Katie-Baity })i({
Okay peeps, so I say this party we are having will be on monday at 3:00 for us Mainers, 2:00 for Lauren. (In case anyone decides to go to the parade after all!)
Woo-Hoo! :D
Wow Katie, an MRI? That sounds scary! And I'm glad your toe is alright, L! We had a friend who had to get that surgery a lot too, (possibly the same one Katie is thinking about. :D) . It sounded not fun! I've never actually been in a hospital. I'm not kidding either! I hope to keep it that way...
Are you scared to fly, or you just haven't done it yet, Katie? I flew for the first time last May, and it's a lot more like being in a bus then I expected. Except for the ear poppyness, which is annoying. Go figure.
Do post before you leave Lauren! Then whenever we're missing your brilliance, we can all go and (as Katie says) oooh and ahh over it! Lol. And can't wait for your fan fiction either Katie!
It is beautiful out, although kind of hot! It feels like we skipped spring, and went strait to summer. It's still over 90 right now! :O The nice thing though, is that I can wear my fab skort out tonight to the play at the high school. Yay! ;)
Oooh, you'll have to tell us what you think of the next POTC! My sister saw it last night (liked it), and now I really want to see it too! I wonder if Will and Elizabeth get back together... hmmm...
Lol.
LOVE YOU!
Annapants
Oooh, jealous jealous. I want to see Pirates 3!
Scary operations! I was in the hospital once, I fell and cut my forhead really bad and had to go to the emergancy room to get stitches.
I'm really happy right now because I just broke the rules and wrote a song for scriptfranzy. I didnt mean to! Its just perfect for it. Its a love song and sooooo mushy, but oh well.
Look forward to your posting, Lauren and Katie. Party here we come!!!!!!!!!! We might even break our record of last time, probably will since we have another person.
KrazyK
Lol! I'll have to scrape up SOMETHING to post, promise! [You guys are so persistant!!]
Haha. :)
I'm REALLY glad your MRI went great, and I can't wait to read the FanFic when I get back! :D
We went to the final meeting, the Bon Voyage "Party" (Wasn't really a party. It was WORK!!!), and played with our suitcases. Whew!
UGH! I want to see POTC 3, too! I won't be, at least not until the DVD comes out, but I reaaallly hope that Will and Elizabeth get back together. I love them. :) Plus, I'd be totally disgusted if they didn't. I mean, SERIOUSLY here! :P
Haha, welcome to my world, Anna! It's already been up in the nineties the past couple of weeks, and it's making me wonder where in the heck our seasons went! I love Spring - WHERE IS IT!?
Haha. (:
Lol, Katie! I've actually flown once, but I was six months old and don't remember anything, so this is going to be a, uh, experience, lol. :) I'm kind of scared, but my guts will push through in the end, I'm sure. You've NEVER been on a plane though? That's really crazy! And Colorado is GORGEOUS! The mountains, trees, enourmous amounts of wonderful snow... Oh, I love it. My grandparents live there, and we end up going once or twice a year. :)
Yeah, Keila, I KIND of broke the rules, too. I'm trying out some scripting for the moment with this free software, Celtx, and it's WONDERFUL. I love it! :D
Yay for parties! See you guys at 3 (2-my-time)! Lol!
♥
Well you know, don't feel any pressure about the posting thing Lauren. I mean, we might just all come howling with dissapointment and rage to your doorstep if you don't, but like I said, no pressure.
LOL! Don't worry, just kidding. =)
I would be totally disgusted if Will and Elizabeth didn't get back together too! Although from watching the trailer, I'd say they are going to. But seriously, what bothered me most at the end of the second one, was the fact that Will was mad at Elizabeth, NOT that Jack had died!
I'm pathetic. Lol.
Wow, so this is going to be like your first 'real that you can remember' time flying L? Oh my, oh my. You must be soo excited and scared! :O
And I just want to say, YOU'RE SORT OF DRIVING ME INSANE, KATIE! :O You haven't been on in awhile... which means you haven't confirmed about the party... which means... well, you get the point.
Sorry if I'm being a worry wart, BUT, it would be most gracious of you to comment! :D
Kthnxbye!
<3
Annapants
OKay sorry about not posting guys-I-did-not-die. We've been cleaning and such ALL weekend and once we're done I just fall asleep. LOL. I will be there this afternoon don't ya worry.
Yeah about the Pirate's movie(not giving any spoilers don't worry)for me on a scale 1-10, 10 being the best...the movie was around 8 and 9 till the ending I thought the ending was around a 5 in some parts. I also will admit, I cried, laughed, got mad and was happy all through the movie ROFL. I didn't hate it but I wasn't like head-over-heels for it.
Ya I know I've NEVER been on a plane, sounds quite pathetic. Some day I'll have to though cause no matter what I'm getting to New Zealand and several other places! Course I could take a boat but it takes longer.
I have to do some things around the house see you at 3!
Kaitie-Baity
W00t!
See everyone at 3/2mytime!
I'll be there for sure!
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